Hi Noa,
Heres my current progress. Im not to happy with how its turned out, but I still have a lot of polishing to do.
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Here's my lemon dealer merchant, I hope you enjoy !! looking forward to seeing all of your work -
Hey Noa, hope your week's been great! Here's what I managed to put out: I spent pretty much half the time just tweaking the... -
I felt like starting a new painting... So here's what i have so far... Ill be pushing it further with some photobashing and rendering by...
Hey Kris! I think it's coming along great!
ReplyDeleteI love the colors you used.
I can see that the face is starting to look a little off balance and you seem to be having some trouble with the nose area.
Here is my paintover in hopes that it will help:
https://i.gyazo.com/f824dfd3a654409c4ba03eb2604cbf58.jpg
mp4: https://i.gyazo.com/397b12f5586e6f6d8448c412c6b20718.mp4
I mostly just cleaned up her nose area of the face and widened the eye further from us to look more even in size with the one closer to us. I imagine you wanted to make one eye squinting a bit more, but it would have been more effective if you made the smile curve upwards more on the squinting side. Like so (or vice versa): https://i.gyazo.com/5ca8842151e99f89a0fcc4550488f410.png
because it's really hard for faces to squish different sides of the face.
I also noticed that the ear was starting quite far back from her head and also causing a tangent with her hat. I as a viewer can't tell if that was very deliberate or an accident and I apologize if there was a very specific reason you picked to do that, but tangents are usually frowned upon as it creates a blurring of design features.